Awesome drawings
Perhaps you could make the voice more clear. If you are the same person doing the voice, perhaps you could ask a friend to help out instead.
Also, some parts were too long to wait for. It doesn't take that long to read. You could add a "next" button for the next scene, or review the flash and see how fast you read it.
voices will be taken off my friend. only good music will be updated. well i felt i timed it out right. u know i'm tryin to look out for the slow readers. u apparently read pretty fast. good for u. thanks for the review.
almost good
the grapics were great but the music and the voices wasn't... it didn't happen so much, there was only a short dialogue and that was all... make it longer and you will get higher score from me
look for part 2 then you will like. but thanks for the review.
hmph,that was sad........
the voice acting was terrible....the visuals were great....the dialogue was cheesy.... and yuo need a new mike or something other than that it was ok i look forward to seeing them fight....
thanks . yes as it was mentioned b4 all of the forementioned sucks! ill make it bettah. dun worry.
could be a lot better.
Uhm... A lot of things come to my mind now. First: The animations okay, but(and this is nothing technical) whats with cloud? He has a wind(which would have been more fitting on Sephiroth) and he is dressed as he is in Kingdom Hearts... anyway, here's the real critic. The sound was... bad. It was OK quality, but the voiceacting was really bad, and not very convincing. Put more heart in it. And get a secondary voiceactor, don't do both persons yourself. You have tried get a few effects in, but they don't suceed. And your animations... hmm... well, the chars are good, but... not very... dynamic. they don't move a whole lot...
Hope you could find a few helpful things in this(although I doubt it)
-Carrion
they were helpful but i already knew all that. thanks tho. voice acting will be taken out. yes i chose the character design from kingdom hearts. dun worry part 2 will be bettah!
Slightly below average
I liked the graphics, and the overall mood was very good thanks to the good choice of music theme. Unfortunately, whoever did the voices of the characters sucks an incredible amount of ass. That totally ruined it for me. My suggestions are: find better voice actors (it should be difficult), and make it a bit longer because there's almost no story here. If you solve these problems, you're going to be closer to "stardom" here on NG.
dude i did the voice acting! and u knoe wat!? yea i do suck...heh heh dun worry dude i will solve these problems and i will become a star! i am going for daily feature for part 2 of this. so that means itll be kick ass. thanks for the review.