excellent but too short :(
Its good very good ! Ya
but short !
excellent but too short :(
Its good very good ! Ya
but short !
very nice
i saw that you didnt have very many reviews so i figured i would help with that
good...
but still..its kinda short...if each cahpter is that small...u could try putting 2 or 3 chapters together
OH SHIT WHAT GON' HAAAAAAPEN.
Sorry about that. pretty cool.
cool
I thought it was good but it could be a little longer