Reviews for Episode 1 - Out Camping

[Miss-kangaroo]

Well...

The voice acting and writing was pretty terrible, sorry. Especially the part at the end, when Link yells, "For the love of God!" I owuld suggest buying Adobe Auditions.

As for the characters and writing, they all seem pretty flat. The "Are we there yet" joke has been done a thousand times, and the fact the characters names all sounded similar was pretty unoriginal.

Now for the good news. The art itself and the animation was pretty nice. The character design wasn't overdone or tired-looking, which was good.

forgetreality responds:

Thank you for the tip, but I'm not exactly loaded with money, so chances of buyding adobe auditions is small. Though I will try and improve it. About the names, well... It's more of a coincidence when coming up with names, might change them, small chance though.

[BlackNoir]

Interresting

It's all good , but the voice acting sucks , im sorry

[suicidal-pigeon]

hey

not bad had me laugh a bit

[elitethis]

lol very funny not many down sides

your flash was very good there wernt any voice problems,contrary to the jerk who wrote before me. your flashs do need to be longer and not taking three diffrent takes for the are we there yet made it even funyer than was. its all good

[landsquid]

good job!

that was good! i laughed 3 or 4 times and sence thats wasnt a very long video thats good. sence this is episode one im figuring there will be a two and a three ect sence series tend to get better as they go... the might turn out to be a very good series. good job!