10 out of 10, 5 out of 5
Well, you managed to make an overplayed piece/theme original again. Thank you. The only suggestion I have that since this is in 3/4, you should have the snare appear on the third kick, instead of every other one. In my opinion, the way you have it now misleads my ears when I listen to the piece as a whole, thinking the snare should be somewhere else in comparison to the melody. That's all I can think of besides the fact that you should finish this piece. Huge fan.