Wow!
Thats was great for the first. Very interesting idea. I'll be thinking of traffic lights in a different way. It was a bit unclear, so maybe you should write a little. But overall its really good.Hope to see second
Reviews for "traffic light"
Good start
Can't wait to see the finished product. Good promise.
Not bad
It's quite good for a first movie. Just a few pointers:
First off, you never, ever tell people that it's incomplete or your first movie. Ever. People don't even bother watching it, they just blam it.
I like the animation style, but it could be a bit smoother. It is nice that your first submission doesn't involve stick figures, Madness or half assed attempts at making a clever joke with crappy animation. That's good.
Get a script. I mean, it was an OK story, but it does need an ending.
That's all I can think of. Keep it up.
Good for a first movie
It's good for a first movie, but when you say "it's just part one" we read "I don't know how to end the story and I don't care". You should never submit incomplete movies. Keep the good work and try to improve your scripts.
I liked the concept!
Very cool idea and concept... my only issue was that I felt like I was having a seizure with the way you had everything kind of always shaking and moving. I know that was part of the style, but it was a little too much for my liking.
Nevertheless, great story! Keep it up.