Cool, but you need new music
I liked the video but you should try using funny music and doing a funny theme... I like your style though. Check out my music and tell me what you think. I know you'll get people to watch your videos, you've got to listen to "I Shit My Pants" would be cool for you to do.. I mean, it's already got a story line and everything. I'm not able to make flash so I'm letting someone else do it.
-MrSafety
You would rock if you did it SERIOUSLY!