Last Cheeto?
There's never only one cheeto left. There's always a lot of leftover crumbs! Anyways, its a great stick flash. Because you used real voices and not just the text. Nice.
Reviews for "the last cheeto ep1"
Why was he wearing Green Shoes? Oh well...
Very good work, Episode 2 showed vast improvement. I'm sure by the third time around you'll have earned yourself a ten.
Haha
I'd give it a 9 if the heads didnt always change sizes it was funny nice job
Very well done
I quite enjoyed this piece of "the last cheato" The obvious matrix throw-in was good, and the story was original. Hard to hear. want to see more, though
Vermillion2 responds:
thanx man !, i actually got the idea for the last cheeto from my art teacher, funny story really. I'll have to work more on making sure that the voice acting is more clear in episode 2, thanx again for reviewing and for the constructive criticing.
Great original idea
i really like the original idea behind this piece of work and how you were able to add to it without being boring or over-doing anything. The only thing i could think i would have like to see more of is adding more of a spoof to kung fu movies (ie; subtitles and whatnot) other than that, keep up the good work. im looking forward to episode 2.
Vermillion2 responds:
lol, yeah kung fu movies are great references. Yeah i didn't want to do a pointless fight. Thanx for watching and for the tips cardboardsnake!.
I'll try some different things for episode 2