This does not belong here........
Starting with the good stuff. The good areas are definatley animation, you also seem quite skilled in drawing out a story line wich is a good thing that in some peoples eyes give it a five. But seriously? a Five is the maximu score = 100% = perfect. And was it perfect? Not really, most things i see that get's a 4+ are things that meld all different components of what makes a good flash movie 1. Graphics 2. Style 3. Sound 4.Story 5.Animation. And this is not a real "flash" movie in my eyes as it is not a vector based animation but a series of images that has been tied together in way of any cartoon movie out there. The style and the animation you get from using vectors is what really makes it "flash". This could propably be fitted mostly anywhere where there are artists sharing their work. But not here....