Wow. There is a lot of emotion in this.
As a tribute towards your brother, this was amazing. As a flash, the only thing that you could improve is the number of repeats of certain actions. They're alright once in a while, but this was overdoing it a bit. The writing is pure gold. I've seen many professionals who aren't as good as that. Keep it up for part 2.
Thanks for bringing out this point. Please read my updated author's comment. I'm surprised that you'd like the writing... thanks, but I surely have lots of problems using English --- not my first language!
When ever you pour your heart into something.....
When ever you pour you heart into something, the chance of it turning out like crap... is very unlikely.
I think this piece had a great beginning. I thought you started it out rather well. Its ending was awsome.
I gave it an overall 9. and I vote a solid 5. I can't wait for part 2.
I enjoyed this piece. I enjoyed your work. It was really thouching. I'm not going to give too many personal reasons why.... YOU JUST MADE IT INTO MY FAVORITE AUTHORS LIST. I can't wait too see where your talent will take you next! Keep up the great work!!!
Great job
You are very good flash autor. Keep at it. Sorry about your brother. He would be proud of You
Good job on the flash
Excellent flash. A little choppy on the animation towards the end though. Hope to see part 2 very soon. sorry about your brother.
very good very good
twas good i liked i found it funny when she repeatedly woke up for some reason