Finaly some feeling
I think its great you tell your story this way.. ofcourse there are some things you could improve, but hey.. you made the 1st flash that kinda touched me.. so keep up the good work :D
Reviews for "Stop Crying - Part 1"
Heartfelt and beautiful
I was really captivated by this peice, it is truely very deserving of the front page. I got a great feel for your directing and the sought of mellow tone, it really rolls along beautifully especially with the narration and action. You show a hell of alot of potential but there is room to improve, but nothing negative at all. I had some troubles with the sound and titles synch and your art will improve the more you go along with the story but at the moment it more than does the job. Im really impressed and captivated by this tale and I wish you the best with future episodes.
Great spirit in a flash for once
I like the flash alot. But unlike your usual flash, this one has great meaning attached to it. I won't tell you how to make your flash better because, what you are expressing is how you preceieve things but anyhow, A great flash for flashbacks =P
Good work!
Sorry..
Well, the flash wasn't too good itself, but on this matter, it doesn't matter. It's something that you made in memory of someone, not something you thought everyone would see as funny.
I'm really sorry about your loss. I haven't lost someone that close to me yet, but I could see how hard it could've been to lose someone that close. If I lost my sister, that would be like the greatest pain that could ever come to me in my life.
And for those who don't agree... Well, too bad.. You must have lost your heart somewhere. You can't even imagine how hard it can be to lose someone close to you. And I'm not talking about that your boyfriend/girlfriend breaks up with you... I'm talking about losing a RELATIVE. Someone who has more or less alwways been at your side, and always done everything to keep you happy and help you out.
You bastards who can't see why she made this flash, should all burn in hell.
That's all for me...
"Fox" out...
^.-
ok... so ur gunna make ur brother's death into a series... woot, have fun spending ur life on the comp getting some e-sympathy, btw the story seems really made up but if its real -.- im sure ur brother will be very greatful that you made a flash series on newgrounds for him