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Kinda sucky the whole thing, I mean, were those supposed to be fighting animtions, loool. Sorry to say, but it really sucked.
Reviews for "Genesis - Part 1"
Jaylaw-theman responds:
This coming from the guy who thought Eternal Complexity was good
Awesome
For an author like you, this flash would be such a succesful project, if you just did better few things:
1)the fighting scenes were pretty awkward; the thing with people going down legs bending didn't work, make these movements more flexible!
2)The expressions on the faces of characters didn't really change at all. If i was in the situation like the last baddie, i would have a really sad face :( or something, try something, for example getting a closeup in the face of hero, when he throws the pieces of glass in the plams of the shirt, then make a closeup on the face of the baddie when he notices the good guy is going to throw the pieces of glass on him!
3)This scene, where the heros walk over the gaps between skyscrapers made me laugh! It was original and also so parodic! Expect this and some other little things, flash was pretty dull, so make a plot! You've got lots of potential so don't fuck it.
Jaylaw-theman responds:
Thanks man, I'll keep your advice in mind!
Very Nice Work!
Great animation, everything moves fluidly and there are no sticking out limbs that I know of. For the next episode try to include more in the space you have. Either go for Action or Comedy, or hell, even both!
Very nice!
Jaylaw-theman responds:
Yeah, I wanna do an Action Comedy series, I have better jokes for the next one!
Awesome.... bloody awesome
This is such an awesome film... even a friend is in there... heya grizz ;P i like how smooth it is and nice music
Jaylaw-theman responds:
Yeah, Grizz got me all the music! Thanks for your review!
Nicely Done
You have a lot of talent and the time and effort you put into this shines through. It isnt free of faults but I think that with practice you will continue to get better and better. This was really a great movie with some pretty cool humour. Nice use of the motion blur effect too. Keep it up mate
Jaylaw-theman responds:
Thanks! Yeah, hopefully Genesis - Part 2 will be better! Thanks for the review!