he he
overall, i liked the idea of an evil tea-bag
is the main flash in production?
cos it would be pretty good if you made it
Reviews for "Evil Cup Man (Trailer)"
Divine-Walrus responds:
Yep, working on the full episode atm. Thanks for the review :)
Great flash
sorry I didn't review it earlier but anyway, love the flash! :)
Keep 'em a coming!
Divine-Walrus responds:
Hey Thanks for the review Mezza, glad you enjoyed it :)
Gave you a tenner cuz I don't wan any flaming. ;)
Pros :
+ It isn't a bad idea for a story.
+ Uhmm something...
Cons:
-The kitchen furniture made it feel like a one story, mile high building because the floor wasn't showing and the chair & table legs were quite... Tall... :P
-You might have had a lot of effort making it but sadly it isn't showing a lot..
-It was quite short even for a... What is it called again... Nvm I'm Finnish anyway. :)
-Oh my ears. I surely didn't like the music. But that's only a half con. Someone else might have liked it...
Over all it was very good if it was your first :P I'd suggest putting more effort when drawing the backgrounds and a little shading here and there doesn't hurt (I have blurry eyes so make it strong shading).
I can't help myself laughing when I think it was you making the vocal part :) It was your little sister, right?
This will make me not to submit any flashes on NG in fear of you tormenting me to the lowest Hell.. :D
ps. DW has a big nose and a furry hat (don't tell him I told you) :F
Divine-Walrus responds:
Thanks, this is the most constructive review yet. Addressing the first con: I purposely made the legs seem to stretch on forever to really push how small he was. As for the size, it's just a trailer, the full episode will be much longer. The music's not for everyone, but I didn't think pop would suit an evil rampage scene :P
Yeah, the backgrounds really are quite subpar, I will improve those. There is a little shading on the table and chair, but not on the background. And nope, not my little sister, it was my little brother ;)
When you submit a flash I'll make sure to be just as constructive as you were :) Shhh...don't tell them about my furry hat, it's a special secret.
Thanks again for the great review!
Nice
That was pretty good it was just too short with almost no story but as i said it was good....... you need to make it longer and put some story behind it............ otherwise keep u the good flash you have some great graphics and sound in it.. and some good backround animation.......soooooo do a remake and make it longer......lol jk Well
Peice out
Divine-Walrus responds:
Wow, a new review! There hasn't been one in over 2 months. How did you find this submission? Email me at bennie_goodfellow@hotmail.com The full episode will be longer with better graphics and sound, seeing as it's been almost 5 months since I submitted this, and I've improved since then. Thanks for the review :)
AWSOME..........I WANT MORESOME!!
Hey Binetter,
incase you dont know who this is (you probably dont) its NAT...........you know the one you left behind in Australia! Ok, so i have an account now....lol dah. Anyway, i would like to say to you and anyone else reading this review that i give this flash "Evil Cup Man" (which i actually inspired david to make) three asparaguses and HALF A PICKLE!!!! (10/10) Oh yes, others might say i am being too generous, but dont listen to them because they are dirty and play with matches!
Keep up the good flashing (in the non-kinky sense) and I cant wait to see whats next on the menu for "Evil Cup Man"..... and possibly his sidekick Natalie the Super Hot Chik Girl Man with One Nose but a hell of alot of fingers!???
Divine-Walrus responds:
Umm....ok, i'm glad i got the honour of three asparaguses and HALF A PICKLE!!!!, but...who are you? I don't know anyone named nat.