hmm..
The animation was above-par, and the art was spectacular aswell. However, I found the story alittle bit strange.....but that, could just be me. Do continue makeing flash. For a first flash, this is bloody awsome.
hmm..
The animation was above-par, and the art was spectacular aswell. However, I found the story alittle bit strange.....but that, could just be me. Do continue makeing flash. For a first flash, this is bloody awsome.
:) Thanks, I will keep your suggestions in mind.
2nd submission?! Not Bad!!
Dude, if that was the second time you've submitted, then you are onto something here! This flash may not be on the frontpage, but it will sure as hell stay here on NG. Maybe 3rd time's the charm. Excellent graphics, just plan the story.
Thanks man!
nice graphics
the graphics are nice, you have a lot of potential. now, you just need a story because it didn't really make any sense. keep trying.. you'll probably have something great in the future.
Thanks Matt. I just figured I would make a short film to just learn more in flash and animating. I will start a new project soon!
yeahea
i pretty awesome man a little short. great animations and the music really fit well with the animation. for a first flashy movie its pretty good. keep up with the work.
you have potential
your animation is decent but ur story was dull. but if you keep at it your bound to make a pretty good flash.