(drop the furry persona, it won't get you far)
snake and liquid both have very manly voices, so it'd make the experience much more authentic if you had a more fitting voice actor. the wit could use some work, some of the bits weren't very funny, such as the excessive swearing part, and the delivery was a bit off. but overall it was pretty funny, i liked some of the more subtle jokes. but i was really expecting more than one little short, based on the title.