I hope you get a good grade.
Very good job. My only real complaint is that during the on paper scene, the people moved their left hands while their left feet move forward. Humans alternate hand and feet movement. I'm guessing that part was more the grading with the body animations and facial expressions. I liked the humour a lot. I even detected a bit of Monty Python influence. I'm sure your teacher will agree!
okay...
the graphics were good, the animation and the style, but the story was hard to follow and some sounds were just a bit off.
And the song at the end was kind of bad. let me explain...
Don't stop me now is one of the best song of Queen( i'm a big fan)
and the way the group in your flash play's it was good, but lacked the essence of Queen. It's because the sucess of Queen is in the balance in the instruments (the guitar, the bass, the drums, the piano and the power of Freddie Mercury's voice) in your flash, the song was always too much of guitar, the singer was bad(and i mean it) lack of chores and did i say too much guitar?
Anyway, goog flash
the best who never have been defeated in SSBM says: 8/10
I'm pretty sure I could beat you in super smash brothers
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Im confused through most of the time it was playing........
Very well done.
I truly enjoyed that flash. I first heard of you through Sketch battle, and was pleasantly surprised to find you here. By the way, was Susie a reference to Saturday Morning Breakfast Cereal?
The best animation I've seen in a long time
This is the best animation I've seen on newgrounds for a long time. Just look how I rated the catergories to see what I thought of it. You could tell it wasn't some amateur piece.