I agree with AnacondaHL...
Sorry to say it, no matter how "poor" you are, the sound was not great, and Anaconda is right, if you can produce decent audio, at least get some nice mellow music to cover the distorted background...
and you're pretty full of yourself if you think that this video could even compare to some of the top 50 videos...you probably think that all these videos are about artwork, your story went nowhere...the ones that have an impact on people are the ones that have a story, they have meaning...yours was a bland meaningless video...