Heh, a good start
^^Good Points^^
This was a good start to a series. I liked how you used your own voice overs instead of Speakonia, it is a pleasant change from the normal. The punchline came in at a great time and the Benny Hill music went perfectly with the randomness of the ending.
^^Needs Improving^^
I was kind of looking forward to a history lesson, unfortunately. :( Also, your shading is really weird looking and not accurate at all. But then again this is a Clock movie, so nothing has to be accurate ;)