Good... good...
I liked these character designs better than your previous ones, and the old projector b&w film was a nice touch. But the music seemed out of place, they're killing vampires and all I hear is amusement park jamboree music. The dialogue was kinda unrealistic too. "Look! They're gone!" I would've probably said, "Shit!" It didn't convey much emotions.
Laura was a good actress when she was in that crying scene. But it moved too quickly to really be that powerful.