its ok
This movie wasn't that bad. It could use some music to make it more interesting, and the timing of the spoken parts for the characters was a little too fast. But it really wasn't that bad.
its ok
This movie wasn't that bad. It could use some music to make it more interesting, and the timing of the spoken parts for the characters was a little too fast. But it really wasn't that bad.
I think it can be way better...
First of all, I assume that you purposely omitted the sound part, to see how good the story can go w/o it. And now that you see your scores, I think you should know what to do next.
IMO, this one was a little better than the first one, but apparently, you are not working hard enough...
lol.. actaully... i was too lazy to put sound... or should I say I wanted to put midi files but macromedia flash don't allow.. haha
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Hey what happen to sound , it wasn't too bad it just needed sound!!!
Why is everything just circles and squares,its just too strange
Keep Working nice style though
Your animating skills need some more practice, but i kinda like your style and humor you 've got potential.
You definately need sound.
This whole movie would be twenty times more enjoyable if you just had some voices and sounds. It is incredibly boring to have to read everything especially when the plot is lacking. Also, things would be much funnier with sounds. It is hard to achieve comidic timing with subtitles.