Uhh, you need sound.
At least some music or sound effects. And if you decide to stick with just text, make the characters dialouge different colors so it's easier to tell who's talking.
Reviews for "Monkit Adventures: Chp 2"
You definately need sound.
This whole movie would be twenty times more enjoyable if you just had some voices and sounds. It is incredibly boring to have to read everything especially when the plot is lacking. Also, things would be much funnier with sounds. It is hard to achieve comidic timing with subtitles.
Keep Working nice style though
Your animating skills need some more practice, but i kinda like your style and humor you 've got potential.
improve it!
it was good for a beginner, but without sound or good animating i got bored of the story pretty quickly.
Badly done, nicely thought
It was pretty bad, although I would prefer to say badly executed. Most likely, this will not pass the portal. I sugest that you try using sound and practice more with your animation. It was kind of dull with no sound and not much going on during the talking. Keep trying, maybe this series (or a different one) will gain popularity.
Monkit responds:
hey, it did pass the portal.. but chapter 1 did not. haha. i wonder when will chapter 2 be dead..