Very good. I might advise you in the future to work on edge quality (like softening up certain edges and hardening others to create a clear focal point). That way it won't seem so busy to look at. Great attention to detail though, good job :)
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KarylAnne responds:
I'll keep that in mind! Thank you so much for the advice, glad you like it! :)
Not sure if its the eyes or the nose. But now we have the impression the nose is facing the wrong way. Meaning we see the right side of the nose, while instinct tell me I should see the left side of the nose. To put it short the perspective is wrong. Except if he has a crooked nose :)
Otherwise an overall expressive work with lovely details.
KarylAnne responds:
I was telling myself the same thing when I finished it! I was thinking that it was probably how I drew the nose and its shadow, I'll have to fix that up later xD Looking at the original photo I can see what part I messed up, thanks so much for the review!
it's really good! you should just try to improve on the eyes! specially the angle and alignment of the pupils! there are other minor details, but your practing is giving really nice results!
Very nice. I only have a few opinions... The right pupil seems to be a lot larger. Also the hand being outside the border... to me it makes it look like someone is resting their hand on the image of the man. (may just be me) I also think the hand may be a tad too big. The details of the wrinkles are amazing. Good work. Keep it up!
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