well...it was ok i guess
i'll give you a score close to ten because i think it was funny how snake didn't even know how to move or how to equip the gun but the funniest part to me was probably when the colonel was watching pokemon and you gotta be really gay to watch that instead of paying attention to the mission and the ending before the credits was pretty funny...
PS: good job, but you still need a bit more work on it....