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Reviews for "The Non-Livingstons #001"

I feel for ya.

There's my life...
as sad as it was,
By the way, there IS an alternative to going to school,
It's called Home Schooled,
It's not hard to do, but most parent out there
send there children to school because they want the time away from them.
Those people shouldn't have children!
Anyway, good job!
Unfortunatly I couldn't find it funny.

It was great til the point...

it was great til the point where the guy has the daydream.That really wasn't funny at all and the ending sucked.

NICE

now that was funny perhaps you could make another one with a nother new kid wering a cloke/robe covering his whole boddy so you only see his eyes and hummm lets see zombie then ho i dont know perhaps DEMON? a verey evil demon or demoness hehehe it could work

Nice but tedious...

You got really good reviews for this one. Given the drawings and quality alone, you've done a superb job. However, I really found it slow and tedious. Really tedious. I didn't even watch the whole thing. Also, I gave you a three for sound because all your sounds were set to "Event" instead of "Stream." I'm not sure if you're aware of this, but in order to sync sound up with animation, if has to be set to "Stream." When I was watching the animation it was highly out of sync because the sound would finish before the characters mouths would stop moving. Sorry for the slightly negative review however I would definately encourage you to keep on doing what you're doing because you've got tremendous talent. And I'm sure this series will definately get better with time as you've got a great idea and great visuals, it's just a slight issue with pacing.

Excellent visuals let down by script and timing.

The artwork and animation were superb but everything else was not at the same standard. The script wasn't very funny and was not acted very well. The visual timing was a bit slow too. Some of the deliberate pauses were sometimes out of place and the whole thing felt extremely forced. If comedy was food this would be like a cold fast food burger. On the surface it looks perfect but bite into it and your left wanting.