Under the polish?
This would have taken you a very long time to do, there's no doubt of that, it looks clean, sharp, professional. You should be very proud of your artistic tallents.
However.
I thought this movie was dull, boring and my mouse was hovering over the "close" button the entire time. This film was obviously done to no set plan or script, there was no beginning, middle or end. The scenes were hackneyed and repetitious -hard to do in a minute movie but you did it!
Play it like hollywood- You can make a bad film with a good script, but you can't make a good film with a bad script.
Look, I'll even go as far as a colaboration. You tell me what you'd like to do and I'll write a script for you! That's my forte, I hate to see great tallent go to waste.