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Reviews for "Mgs: Sts (previwe)"

Graphics? Not too bad. Funny? Eh, questionable.

To start: the graphics are pretty good. But you might want to cinsider making your own buttons, rather than using Flash's buttons library. It's just not too stylish. The voices sound a little wierd though, but the acting wasn't all THAT bad. The humor isn't quite there either.. I see where you were going, but it could've been funnier. It's also way too short. There's not much use submitting something if it has not much of a point AND only 10 seconds on amusement. The music in the end was pretty good to listen to though.

didn't really like it...

i dont want to sound like an ass, but i didn't really like the voice acting, it was more cheesy than funny. Animation was okay.

CiyFox responds:

Sorry about that i'm still working on it. Though it's pritty hard when your a girl.
But hay, thanks for your hounsty. ^_^

Work on sound

Your art/animation was great, but the synch and sound was way off. You should have used subtitles.

If you need actors go to the LegendaryFrog forums, you'll find no shortage of actors there who will be more than willing to help (especially since you're a girl)

Just keep at the writing side of things and you'll do a lot better

Ahhhhhhhh!!!

The one thing i dislike about animations is real bad use of radial effects. Dude.......you have a good style but if you are going to use radial or linear effects dont use the ones from the bar, make your own ones! Change that and you'll have a pretty cool animation, you got a nice style don't ruin it by bad use of radial!

wtf

This is the 4th MGS submission in like the last hour. WTF. Voting much harder on this one, and the sound quality is crap.
-AnacondaHL