good start
a lil 2 short but a good start it seems to have a good plot set and could be a nice flash
good start
a lil 2 short but a good start it seems to have a good plot set and could be a nice flash
excellent start!
my only complaint -> TOO SHORT!
you need to keep pounding away at this... don't get frustrated and quit.
keep going and you will have a great presentation.
Nice
Nice graphics, sounds. Although it's too short. Make it a little longer and it'll be great.
Keep up the good work.
ok ....
so you lack in flash skills,and the art wasnt all that great
but danm you sure have a nack for story telling and over all show
i liked this alot, in time i can see you getting better with flash, and better with the art
i really cant wait to see more from you
you really need to fix the sound tho
Art
This was great, I loved your work as images looked cool, it was too short and I couldn't here the voiceover.