I like this song...
I do love SoaD, and this song is one of my favourites... but you didn't include the slower part... but ANYWAYS...
The animation was very choppy and you could have done more transitioning, and more effects... (I mean in the sense of not just the band members playing, but more like an actual flash movie, if you get what I'm saying?)
But I still liked it, better luck next time ^_^
Aww thanks ^_^ <3
Snowblind
Yeah it's downloaded online. I think it might of been a soundtrack they did for Nativity in Black. i dunno, i downloaded loads of thier soundtrack tunes.
The animation is ok, nuthing too great though
=)
i love s.oad. man...
.. and the song snowblind is niiice! but i agree with kukushka--work on it more maybe?! it dosent match up and u havent even featured serj tankhian (singer) in this -o- good song not very well done sorry (vote 3)
=D will do thanks!
Snowblind
The name of the song is Snowblind, it's a cover of a Black Sabbath song.
With that out of the way...
Wow, I'm surprised this passed judgement. Nice. But I don't think it should have. Theloop isn't good, the graphics are terrible and they don't look like they are playing their instruments at all. And where's Serj?
Whenever it showed the bassist or guitarist there was a second or so gap where they were just standing there not playing. Look at real instruments and musicians to learn how they play their instruments so this doesn't look like crap.
=)
Alright..
What is going on in the image doesn't match up with the sound at all. It's a real shame. That's the first thing you should always try to do - make the sound part of what is happening.
The second issue is with the loop. The song just cuts dead and there's this 5 second or so period when nothing is happening at all except one of the band members twitching.
And finally, there's a real lack of variety with what happens on the screen. It's just 2-3 images of each band member stuck together without much consideration for the music playing or anything. Yes, those 2-3 images do fly around on the screen a bit, but that's just not interesting.
Your drawings are nice. I like that. But you need to *do* something with them. Have something interesting happen on-screen. If you choose to have sound, make it match what is going on. This is absolutly crucial.
Good luck with your next piece. I hope you learn a lot from this one and make the next one really fantastic :D
:) thanks for the advice.