It's Alright...
This flash gets my score on two aspects that stood out:
Original Characters
Plot without much substance but stayed consistant
But this flash had some stuff that kept it from being really really good like:
Boring animation
Repetitive music
Keep working on your flash skills...you'll be better by the next flash you release if you read the people's comments including this one ^_^. Good job
Nada mau
Um bocado comprido talvez
Eu sei que esta comprido, e nas próximas animações estarei melhorei nesta parte. A fuga foi feita de julho a Novembro de 2004. Obrigado por comentar.
Very nicely done
A neat idea, and well done from start to finish despite the short cuts you took (walk cycle, ect).
That said, I beleive that the movie would have had a greater effect if you had used slapstick violence, rather than blood and death. With your style of art, and the mood of your backdrops, a set of whirling stars would have fit in far better than a pool of blood.
As well, the ending was very bland. I was waiting for something interesting to happen to draw it to a satisfying finish, but instead, he simply died out in the desert. That is your choice as the author, but it was a very un-interesting one.
allow me to close on a more positive note: the drawings were exellent, and the music, while simplistic, fit very nicely (though a little variation would have complemented the piece)
Nicely done
keep up the good work
not bad
it wasn't really funny, but it deserves more than the last guy gave it.
holy shit!
Mario and luigi is coming to get u