Very creative.
This was pretty funny and as action packed as cartoons go. I love the "oldschool" soung fx and great animation......make another.
Reviews for "A Fuga (The Escape)"
very creative..
well i guess that just goes to show you should have a decent plan if u plan on escaping a prison like that! I liked the style and animation... sweet flash man!
lucasgonzaga responds:
Thanks friend.
Super damn Duper
Reminisent of the great escape or somthing, what this flash lacked was speed, and transition. The scenes were just the guards in pursuit of the prisoner, and then somthing mildly odd happens. The guards had the guns but never used em, instead that billy stick is just thrown, idk. Do somthing with the music, sounded like it was a midi file or somthing, combine different music techniques. Keep the whole cartoon effect, like the dash and all that but tone down the violence a little, and maybe put a before seen in, like the background of the prisoner, and how he escaped. And why werent there any other prisoners in the cells? Pretty empty prison all together with only 3 guards. Overall though its fine, just add a bit more creativness to it, maybe another ending, like he runs all the way through the desert only to be stopped by a patrol car on a nearby road or somthing. hmm
lucasgonzaga responds:
We have to remenber that this is just an animation and mistakes all the movies have, the next will be better. thanks for the review.
Not Bad.
Man, don't listen to those other guys. Compared to most of the stuff that enters the portal, this was great.
1) Better dialogue. What little there was was unintelligible.
2) Better ending. Frankly, just dying in the desert is a bit uncreative. While the irony of him dying by nature after escaping guards is funny, it isn't as good as a real twisted ending.
3) They had guns, but didn't shoot? Not good.
4) More stuff should have happened inside the prison, not just running and shouting, with the occasional event.
Keep up the good work.
lucasgonzaga responds:
Ok thanks... Im going to try to follows your advices.
Good, but no Cigar
Nice flash animation, by the way.
I loved the overall authenticity of it, this is something that would be very good, if only there were a few more elements added into it.
It sound was monotonous. Try to add a type of beat to the music.
The animation, however, was great. I loved how the characters ran. It seemed very comical.
I really liked how the protagonist died in the very end. Something you don't find very often in other animations.
I have to give this submission a 7 out of 10, however. Nice try at a short movie. All I know is that this is way better than what I can do.
And a side note- I dont think anyone has the right to trash this movie if they cant do better.
lucasgonzaga responds:
Thanks, It´s hard to make a big animation like this and everybody just put you down, but anyway, the next will be better !