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It was very artistic, loved what you stride to achieve, and in the manner you tryed to achieve it. Hence the 9 for style points. I can see effort went into this, which is more than I can say for alot of animations entering the portal these days. I really liked the red and black theme, however some of the graphics wern't quite upto snuff. I'm talkin detail here. Which also meant I couldn't quite tell what was going on in places. Just a little work needed, not much, but some. Otherwise good job.