Reviews for Hunter - Nin Episode 1

[Azure-One]

"(Shadow) Clone Technique!"

Heheh, I found "Some elements were inspired by Naruto" funny just after reading the bios. Originally, I was going to point out all the borrowed stuff, but I see others have done that. Anyways, I got a kick out of this desipte the extensive "inspiration".

However, it's going to be hella confusing for anyone who doesn't watch Naruto. "no jutsu" who? What's a "kunai"? Saying "ki" (or chi, decide on one) instead of "chakra" illuminates things for the DBZ fans at least. So either explain in-movie like the series did, or offer a glossary at the beginning with this stuff and BE CONSISTANT! And either way, you shouldn't use japanese function words like "no".

As for music, I think there could have been better matches for some situations and using the Naruto MAIN FRICKIN THEME for the main menu was a little too much.

Make up more interesting characters and techs for the next part.

[Kisuke]

Eh...

It's okay, it does make me sick of how much of a rip off it is of Naruto though. The animation is good, but they style is, so much of a rip off though. Yeah some of the moves are yours, but the rest is just borrowed. :/ It's alright, I gave it a 3 for measure, even though I don't like it. Just try and make the next part not so much of a replica of Naruto, especially the red stick. I mean, you might as well call him Orochimaru for goodness sakes.

-Master

[moose-cat]

that was kinda lame

first dont use no jutsu in an english sentence i just doesnt sound right.
second the ninja blade (katana) wasnt meant for a sword fight its more of the stealth kill and a tool not a big ass sword.
and u used naruto music man i mean couldnt u find something else i mean the show is good but find something that fits ur flash dont take something that just makes it feel stolen.

[microscansim28]

Good but i hate stiks!! HOSTILE not hostal dumshit

Good but i hate stiks HOSTILE not hostal dumshit lol
nice job i give it a 3/5

[pieisncie]

umm....no idea what to say...

well........ok, honestly. i would think better of this, if you had said: this is a stick animation BASED on naruto. instead of: this was inspired by naruto, or wtv you said. dude...why didn't you just keep the names and stuff the same? and the characters are pretty wierd, like...the butcher has Zabuza's sword, but that othere dude has his mouth bands thing. i guess it was alright, but i thought it'd be alot better...and how you ripped it off from naruto was kinda annoying. but it was still good, fights were cool. story...didn't really get it, but wtv. anyways, nice submition, but i think you can do better. don't stop animating