whoa cool!!
hey if i give u money, can u send me one???
just joking.. don't get ur "romanman" all excited.
nice idea, i almost fell off my chair when i heard the girls voice... jeez.. she's had 1 too many "romans" down her throat if you know what i mean... *wink wink*
any way.. great idea, i thinks its time we start teachin all u virgins out there the truth about "romans"
Needs work...
Nice concept, but it needs some work. Maybe try stepping back from the mic a bit, also work on the voice acting, and a female voice for the female would be nice, though the male voice for the female was kind of funny. Try listening to those tv commecials that always say things like "oh no, how many times has this happened to you?" or "but wait, there's more!", listen to how the announcer speaks, try to imitate the announcer. Smile when you read your script, I know it seems like an odd thing to say, but it really does help. The more realistic this seems, the funnier it'll be. BTW, I thought the rust away bit was funny. I hope to see more from you in the future.
Ok, so yeah that was dumb as hell
Even though you said you made the animation like that on purpouse..it still looked crappy. The sound was stupid, and whoever was reading it seemed unenthusiastic. It could have been much better with some Enthusiasm, better animation, and something not stupid.
Ok... but not Front Page Worthy
It was ok... but it isnt Front Page worthy... the humopr was dry, and yes I understand the sound was bad... so maybe just brush up on that and then we e all good... so all in all, I can only really... give you a 3 for that.
I hope to see a better flash from you soon.
Eh...
I got about one hard laugh and a few light chuckles. The sound wasn't too great, neither was the animation. You had some of the basic elements of humor, but lacked polish and follow-through. Good attempt, though, but not worthy of the front page. Sorry.