It's good
Since this could get a good rave song for easy-going people and could be up for an animation creation contest with the songs here could really boost up your music to a thousand or hundreds of people waiting for interesting songs to be made into something unbelievable to listen and to have the only thing in common that is FUN!
Breathy
I like how the instrumentation sort of pulls out a texture of breath, the melody and intensities are right on in the beginning making the song almost seem alive itself. I like where you went with the piece at about 1:00, but it seemed a little disconnected from the intro. At some points I also noticed the whole song feeling kind of... well not empty, but not full either (1:38-1:52) which resolved right after, but that one part sounded a bit suffocated.
Everything was mastered really well though, and the melody was certainly catchy, good beats, nice foundataion. I really liked the mood you set with this one, it's always interesting to be put somewhere by a piece of music. I also really like the textures you put in throughout. It's a sort of thing that you don't notice unless you're listening for them (which is great).
Good stuff, congratulations on breaking the block (Augh! I wish I could break mine). FiVd NinD
Hmm...
Ok, it's a really good song man, it's just that, like the others said, you new to bring something new to our ears. About your last 10 songs all sound very similar. The first We Beleive's were good, but all your songs after those jsut go down hill... But you did make Dream of Air, which is a little different :)
4/5
Thanks for reading,
Digital Pulse
Amazing... But i agree with Wyldfyre1
Yeah something different... This is really perfect. But then again, i wasn't really too suprised like i was when i heard "We Believe Ep. 5" and "Chinese Dance Machine" the 2nd version for the first time.
This kinda reminds me a bit of DJ-Splash's style mixed with your melodies.
This is still amazing, not doubt about that. I just miss something more original.
But then again. it's hard to come up with something new...
The people are asking for something different.
this song does shine in many different ways but perhaps it is time to write something that people arn't expecting (like we were talking about the other day =). As always i love the melody man you've always had no problems with coming up with something beautiful on the ears!
Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1