fantastic!
this part is even better then all the others which i found sublime till this day, even frog is funny !
can't wait till episode 8 comes out! XD
BTW : did anybody found out how to unlock the secret scene?
does it have anything to do with ; "he who searches secrets must also search out the light" ?
Thanks! I'm glad you're getting into the series.
And about the secret...you must seek out the light. But it comes from an illuminated object you can't find in that scene....
very funny
You definately know how to write witty banter. This is the first time i've laughed out loud at something that has no audio for its dialogue. The well timed jokes are executed very well. I personally thought it was going to be another boring crono spoof...but your ability to write good humor overcame that. good job.
Thanks man! I really appreciate all the "I laughed out loud" comments. It lets me know I'm doing the humor right, at least.
Well, It's good... but...
I, personally, don't think there was enough motion. I mean... Even in the real CT, there was a lot of dialogue, but they balanced it out with... people... walking... around... a lot....
Yeah, I understand that. Looking back it is pretty static. But I can make more motion, and I will for episode 8. I do actually pay attention to what most of you are saying, and I will implement any useful critisisms.
hmm
You lost points with me on a few things, some of the text was annoying to read w ith s paces i n between the t ext. Second, this line bothered me, "this rates about a 9.3 on my weird shit o' meter." I know you took that from a movie, I can't remember which one it was, for some reason I think it was one with Chris Rock but I'm probably wrong. I'll find out, oh yes...I will. I hate it when people do that. Ruins the creativity of it all.
Aye. The spaces between the letters was caused by the font I use, and I will definitly be switching to a new font for EP 8.
As far as movie quotes go, in my defense, many people like refrences like that, especially if they fit the scene well. But I do know where you are coming from and, if I had my way, I'd be the only funny person in the world so all the jokes would be originals. ^_^
BTW it was Will Smith in MIB.
There
was way to much reading for my liking but i did like the story line and everything and the sound was good.. all that i really didnt like was all that reading.
Sorry...most of the humor here is text-based. I'll try and include some more visual slapstick for Episode 8.