yeah, okay
the motion trails sucked a little, and the music did my head in, but otherwise, GREAT JOB!
Reviews for "xiao style 1"
St3lf responds:
heh....i dunno what to say, thanks for the review :p
Well.... semi-good
A couple of things is essential for this flash... First of all, even tho' you have made pretty nice animation some of them just aren't "realistic". Not that fighting movies has to be realistic but the movement aren't anatomically correct (ok english is not my first language and i don't know if there's a word called "anatomically correct" but what the heck)...
And also the medium score (6 here and 2 in the votes) is because the style is over-used... It's been done and also have been seen... So that's just bad luck... But it was pretty and all, and a really nice job...
THERE IS WORK TO BE DONE ...
you got to thinks of some Music-in the end or in the beginning or both :)
Becus the loop u converted into the flash sucks like hell ...
But overall nice job mate maybe next time think about the music and find an original Style :)
good luck !!
sucks big time
bad rip off!
St3lf responds:
you clicked a link that said 'xiao style'. what do you expect?
and if it sucks big time then im happy you gave a 6 :)
next time, if you feel like this, would you mind saying why it sucks and what in particular is bad about it so i can improve.
rip off: well, considering you clicked a link that says 'xiao style' what did you expect? and its not a rip off, its kind of the same style...
well thanks anyway xD
Not bad at all.
I recommend watching a stick animation called
Stick Kung Fu
I'm not sure if it's here on NewGrounds or
some where on the Web.
You can pick up some ideas from that.
I really like stick animation,
you did a good job,
The music loop wasn't bad,
but the screen was too small for me,
Keep practicing, you have good talent!
I'll check out your other submissions,
please make more stick!