bad presentation hides your talent
voices are excelent, drawings are excelent, scenery is excelent, fight scenes are excelent however the way you put them all together to make a story is really confusing. I didn't know what was going on. For example, i couldn't make a link from the carnival to the killings. Maybe it's because i havn't seen the other ones. i think the voice acting was your saving grace here. pretty good work though!