I like the intro extremly much
and the bass wich came in at 0:13 is so wellmade! but then the part after kidna destroy the peaceful mellow.
i don't like the Hi-Hat its too hard, but if u replaced that, this song would be a 10 ;]
U got talent, if i didn't know u it would be a 10, but when i know ur skillz, its a 9 ^^,
Helth
5/5
gratz on top