Better. Much better
This was funnier than your other eps, and I'm glad to see Etna and Flonne have voice actors.
I don't know what to say about you VA for Flonne. On one hand it sounds nothing like FLonne in the game, on the other hand it fits her quite well (was this based on her japanese voice? I never got to here it since I have the PAL diseaga. DANG YOU NIPPON ACHI!).
You Etna is good but not great. Try to make it less high pitched.
I'm a little annoyed you cut out one of the best lines in that episode.
Flonne: My! How rude, calling somebody you just met dense!
Laharl: I think that an assassin who tries to kill someone in his sleep is a lot ruder.
Flonne: ...You're right. I apologize.
Laharl: *sweatdrops* (...Is she really an assassin?)
You may find using the script on gamefaqs handy.
Oh and I think that line by Lammington was a bit out of characther. The dude is supposed to be mellow. Like almost on dope mellow.
Oh and I'd advice you to cautious about how you va ???? , not everyone has played to the end, so making his idenity to obvious could spoil things.
But overall this epsiode was good and marked a large imrpovement. Keep it up