O.o
Why was the cross-hair a chozo artifact....? -.-;;;
Reviews for "Paper Mario Adventures #1"
Come back with a better plot
The sound effects and the jokes were a good point in this one, but it really lacks a true story. The crate gag was quite smart :p. The custom cursor was a nice little feature too. Keep up practising !
RyoumaNagare responds:
Yeh...I know. This is a piece of crap. It was FbF. Now, I know tweening and stuff. I'll be back...with better flash.
You need a better plot.
You have a nice story but not a good plot. You next flash should be better if you attempt it.
well....
well you tried... just practis your flash skills that is all
Meh..
The graphics jump, some words were spelled wrong, and it was boring.
You should fix it up a bit, and make it have some storyline, and have stuff happen, then possibly re-submit it if you think it's much better.