Needs more work
I still want more complecity, maybe add some reeverb to the guitar, and try expeimenting more with slayer. But effects onto the quitars, and make the background guitar louder. And maybe slap in some more instruments and more effects to really make the song great. BUT!! I have to say..get the full version of FL Studio...not that the plugins already in it will change, but so that you can download more VSTs and synths, sounds, packs and stuff to improve your songs. Good attempt tho, but just need to make it better. And i dont think this had enough variation for a 4 minute song, try to cut it down to 3:00 - 3:30, or add WAY more instruments and variation. The drums tho.. they are good, but add more drums and percussion to really make it interesting. The #1 thing to add onto this song tho, is complexity. I know its hard because of having the demo, so you have to do it all in one sit so..just get the full xD. Well, im not a professional or anything but thanks for thinking of me as a pro :D 8/10. 5/5 to boost up the score a bit :D