S'alright
This was alright. The beginning captured me with the good graphics and all, and then the poor animation came in and I slowly lost my interest. The sound came off well. The dialogue made me chuckle a little. Over all it was alright. Try using bolder lines in your animations. it makes everything look alot more smoother and it's easy to the eye. Nothing too new or interesting. Hope to see more from you.
*bow* thanks and I'm sure my later works will be better.. if you view all the flash thingy's I made (chronographically) you'll see that I become better with every single movie.. bad thing is that not everytime the same audience is watching ;D
What?
I really have no idea what happened during this flash. It had an introduction longer than the movie itself, the graphics where terrible, and I'm really not even sure what that green square embedded itself in Riddick's stomach for. Empty sugar box? What? I'm lost, and I didn't laugh.
okay.. for the slowest beneath you.. there is this sentence wherein riddick spoke about a "cup".. when he say cup this little square moves.. now.. guess what that square may be? A CUP! If you didn't saw the movie you perhaps don't be able to realize why he mentioned an empty sugar box.. if you did.. I cannot help you.
Horrible!
First off you did the most wrongist thing you could do. You choose Riddick. That movie sucked. About 40 present of the people will agree with me. The idea of this short was inspired by the beging of the movie. While this is the worst part in the movie also. In order to improve your flash, tinker with it rather than make a movie. This movie sucked.
hehe nobody forces you to watch this. Neither riddick nor a flash movie about it.
Too bad
I thought this was going to be good, but the graphics were unbelievably awful. It completely ruined the flash for me. Work on those next time.
:P Show me that you can draw it better and I do as you wish ;)