Almost disturbing.
I think you were looking at yourself too much in the LCD screen because you kept looking off camera.
Reviews for "Jesse's Girl"
Kinda like Numa-Numa dance
After the Numa-Numa Dance craze, I guess anyone will try to be the next Numa-Numa Star. Oh well, keep on truckin' dude.
Haha.....
that was funny man. I checked out your profile and it says ur from T.O. Well, I'm near there. Great to see some good Canadians on here. VIVA LA CANADA!!! You should make more of these. I love the song you chose too.
~ Super-Mike
Yeah, she's looking with those eyes,
..but yours freak me out.
It was quite painful to watch after a while, because of those eyes. O_O
Ah, I didn't see anything interesting about it, actually, because it is one of those sing and mime along kinda thing, with a camera beside you kinda work. Looked suspiciously like raw footage cut and submitted already.
The transitions were pretty normal, use of fade. Camera angle was just from one angle, frontal shot. Talent on the screen freaks me out, but that is another story.
I couldn't finish the whole flash, cos it was rather boring.
But i ain't the type to criticize and walk away, because there is still the effort in it, so ...
You should try new camera angles, the fancy tricks. Imagine something new. Low angled shot from under the sofa? Inside the fishtank? attached to a cat or dog or whatever? Of course no animal abuse methods! You can even get your friend to direct or something, because i doubt you are camera shy, this flash video being splashed to thousands and thousands of eyes.
Do something interesting. Get someone to roleplay the girl? Maybe you can try cross dressing? That would be ultimately gay, but it entertains. lol. Ah, these ideas popup randomly from my head, so i wouldn't say they are great suggestions. Lousy, infact. XD
Change of clothes? At least something changes in the video. Or change of venue? Yes the final point i am trying to drive in is change. Don't be static, don't be plain. Do something daring. Unique. lol.
Woohoo
I liked the fade-ins & outs. You should re-do it and put in a couple shots of your butt cuz you have a pretty good body. Less titty shake shots, though... although that was pretty crazy. More sexy less pensive! Make Jessie's girl WANT YOU!