Very nicely done.
I think you did a very good job presenting your body and an excellent job of getting the 1984 feel across. The only reason I didn't rate you higher is because I really lost the feel of the mssage when you had the "blue" taking up arms against the "red." It seems to me that you justify the "red" totalitarian actions when you start killing them... I loved everything else though :-) Especially the giant walking elephants. Your not so subtle republican/democratic imagery was well done throughout.