heres some advice
in the beginning the movie stays to long on that flower. the newgrounds people want fast action type animations. if it takes you that long too step on a flower people will get bored and be uninterested in your video. also put more detail into your orcs. what youve done is is take a creature witch should be drawn with very carefull pressision. and messed it up. it looks like you took five minutes or less drawing and making these orcs. the reason that your animation is bad is that you rushed through it.take some time to make detail. also i cant tell which orcs are on which side. you have to differenciate between enemys. or else nobody would know who to kill. another thing is give your characters more human like movement. they look like robots to me. im giving you a 0 out of 5 clovers. if you disagree with hat ive said in this review. write me back.