That was pretty good
I suggest that you should use some voicework and correct some spelling. Also the ambient noises can get a little bit annoying. Either than that it was pretty good
Keep up the good work
That was pretty good
I suggest that you should use some voicework and correct some spelling. Also the ambient noises can get a little bit annoying. Either than that it was pretty good
Keep up the good work
Gd start
i no how hard flash is and this is pretty gd apart from u should use voices instead of text and plus ur spelling spoils it a lot
I donno what the deal with others are.
I liked it and i can't do half as good as you. but that was pretty damn good for a first flash maby you could PM me or just reply to this comment how you learned how to do it all. i hope this doesn't go in the obitchuary. the only reson i say that is cuz of the score i saw when i voted. but good luck. =)
not bad
wow it was pretty good...not bad man.... it needs sound though... hope you can do better next time
Good start.
Better than most of the recent front pages lately. Work on dubbing and you're set.. plus some more experience.