What?
You really tried?? Don´t stop >:(
What?
You really tried?? Don´t stop >:(
Shame to see such skills go to waste
Looks like you could do a lot better if you wanted to. Nice animation and all, but you could have dome something with it. As far as a trailer to something better is concerned, this is trully uninspiring. Any more of this animation, even as nicely done as it is, would be utterly boring. Good animation will only get you so far, try writing some script/action/plot to put behind your skills.
If this is your first try, then this is great
The good:
Even if it's not your first, it's still a great job. Your animation style is nice and shows promise for even more improvement.
The background music and sound effects are PERFECT. They're spot-on.
The bad:
You do need to be a LITTLE louder with your voice acting however.
When you're animating, try to stylise your characters more to make them look unique. Shadowing would also help.
The ugly:
While an animation size of 1.6 Mb isn't TOO bad, you can make it even smaller with audio compression and other tricks. This goes a long way in boosting your score with fickle Newgrounds reviewers.
Have fun and keep aiming for the Frontpage!
Not bad
OK, 1st off I really liked the attention to detail on this, the backgrounds weren't too busy, but not lacking either. There was very little action & I thought it needed something, but I'm not sure exactly what. Maybe more of a story? I did like the funny little twist at the end, what is French for "booty call"? Maybe try the same approach, but from a 30's detective movie point of view, you know with some narration over? It's just a thought, it might open it up for more humour, or plot twists, etc...
Great movie, great graphics
Good movie, and it´s cool that the browser is that big! The music was very exiticing I liked it all. But it´s too bad that it´s a little bit short. Keep up the good work