Very interesting...
Hello, it's sourpuss critic AngstyKitsune back once more...
I'm not really sure where it was you went wrong, but there was just somthing...off...about this one. Though the vocal element was well done, it took somthing away from the basic simplicity of the original. I've never really though of this as a vocal piece, and as well implimented as that element was, it still didn't change my mind. Other than that, the falling water at the begining came on a bit strong, and some greater variation from the classic instrument and tone could have done wonders.