Good for a first flash
I think its good, there were a few parts that didnt make much sense, they best advice i could give u is to work on the human figure and learn how it moves and stuff, keep up the good work,
Reviews for "Bussman No.1"
Hmmmm nice!
Hiya there mate, thanks for telling me about the link to this animation. Well, where should I begin? ;^) Okay firstly, it too fast and hard to keep up what's happening within the animation. I like how it kept changing from scene to scene, so i wasn't bored of watching the same thing for a long time.
I liked the bird flapping? is it a phonix? Could you work more on that? Perhaps its flying in the sky or flying between the trees? Dunno, i'm just brainstorming... Sorry back to the review.
I love the guy flying though the air and crashes into the house. :)
At the start, you used a stick man! Okay, as this is your first flash i'll let you off but I tend to blam stickman animations. It's so annoying to see them. Work more on the credits and the buttons.
make the credits longer, so you can read it and add a hit area for your button, so you dont have to hang over the text to play the animation again.
Okay mate, I like what I see. The experient animation is good and you should start working on a concept story. Use what you learnt and use the feedback information to help you to improve. Take care!
Love from,
CoolAddz
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Bussman responds:
Thanks A Million Addz, the best and most insightful review yet. I will take everything into my learning..
Thanks!
What happend?
Wow that was fast how many fps i couldn't see what was happening if some one blinked while watching this they would miss the whole film. And was there a storry line or was it was squigally lines.
Bussman responds:
Its 25 fps, and no story line..thanks for the opinions.
That was random.
Pretty cool, it would be much better if it were longer though. Continue to release stuff like this but...yeah longer.
Interesting Piece
I liked it, very abstract in the way its completly freestyle transformation and artistically constructed.
I also noticed there was a fair bit of raw flash illistration too, well done.
I would just say to work on the drawing aspect in flash, although that was a good piece better illistrations would make it just that much better.