Good Stuff
thought it could have used some vioce acting though...
or subtitles would have been better than the jumping back and forth to a blank screen.
Good work
Good Stuff
thought it could have used some vioce acting though...
or subtitles would have been better than the jumping back and forth to a blank screen.
Good work
Pretty good!
The animation was decent and it was enjoyable enough as a flash, but dude, get a dictionary out and check your spelling next time, there were at least 4 mistakes and it's really annoying to see them.
You tried to hard
The animation was decent but could definately use some work. The concept, at first, seemed great. I mean whats bad about a ninja killing people. But then you started throwing in all these one liners and typical story plots. Plus you made him seem like a hypocrite by shunning the guy for using a gun when in fact he used one a few seconds earlier. I can handle the fact that he used a gun but the fact that it didnt have a silencer and that he was a hypocrite about it kinda angers me. But otherwise good job.
meh.
I like ninjas. He should fight pirates next time.
The story part is kinda funny because it's so generic, but if funny is what you were going for, you overdid it.
If you were being serious on the other hand, I think you may want to consider therapy.
super duper
was good but the dialouge was sooooooooooooooo lame hope u make more