technically average, but otherwise pretty good
So this story had half-decent graphics, I don't see how that made this a bad flash.
PROS: - Excellent musical choices (I didn't seem to have any problems with it).
- Thoughtful story.
- Nice editing and cinematic integrity.
CONS: - Graphics are poor (but I've seen worse)
For a first flash, this is really good. Better than alot of stuff I've seen on the Portal. You've definitely got potential. Keep at it.
Thanks, i'll try harder on my next one.
I`ve seen a lot, lot worse
This was very well done, you used some great techniques in potraying this horrible, horrible TRUE story. The music was great to emhance the effect of sorrow, and it helped quite a lot. Glad to see that you really treated the subject with respevt, as it should be treated.
This was a goos first flash, though the graphics were crappy. But as I said, I`ve seen worse.
P.S: I was gonna give this a 6, but after RipRaps immature review I decided that it was worth more if there are people who take it like that.
Thanks!
it was pretty good...
my only problem was ithat your characters looked like playskool people which made me laugh a little
It was my easiest way to learn motion tweens and symbols..didn't want to get too complex. >_<
Decent.
I think you know that the graphics need some work and you mention the sound mistake, so you seem to know what needs improving. If you really did work seven hours on this, you may want to consider proofreading everything because there was a misspelling or two and some backwards swastikas. Really good for a first flash. About the content in general: everyone seems to know about the holocaust and consider it bad. I think it would be interesting to have a movie devoted to things people don't necessarily know a lot about like the Armenian or Rwandan genocide. Can't wait to see your next work.
Good Job
Like everyone before me has said the music fit really well. The bunnies are unnecessary in the opening train scene, bad start to try and set a somber/melancholy mood. Yeah so the people were egg shaped, the only real problem with the graphics besides the obvious was after the Nazi had burned the one Jew on his march back to the other two when his arms kept flailing out as he walked, I've never dealt with flash so I don't know if that's something that couldn't be prevented or just error on your part. All in all good job for a 1st flash.